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oki oki my first poem haha! Sticking out tongue
eum wanted to say that some words just dont fit, and some Im not sure if its the right ones...
but anyway... enjoy Sticking out tongue

''Life is like a beach
everyone of us is a rock
we're running away from the waves
fearing it as the plague
because when it takes us away,
its our breath that disapear...
and anyway there's tones of other rocks,
watching the waves erupt,
taking our place so trivial in this wolrd..

And me,
with my poweless look,
I'm watching this wave that you fight back,
the demons of our happy days.
I'm fearing it more then anything else
'cause I know so well that when it'll take you away finally,
theres gonna be no return...''

french version: Sticking out tongue
''La vie, cest comme une plage
chacun de nous est une roche,
nous fuyons les marées,
les craignants comme la peste
car lorsqu'elles nous emporte,
cest notre souffle qui disparait...
Et malgré tout, il y a dautre milions de cailloux,
regardant les vagues déferlées,
prenant notre place si futile en ce monde

Et moi,
le regard impuissant,
je regarde cette vague que tu combats,
les démons de nos jours heureux.
Je la crains plus que tout,
car je sais si bien que lorsqu'elle te prendra pour de bon,
il n'y aura aucun retour... ''

I write it for my grandfather, who i almost lost a couple of weeks ago
enjoy Eye-wink

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yeah i guess its because i translated the words that it fits better in french...
we'll have to wait that i get inspiration, yes XD
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yeah i would help you mate id love to Smiling translating is hard and thna keep the words fit...maybe that is why it fits beter in french Sticking out tongue yeah when you are angry or hurt ...you get inspired nini..if i werent feeling s*** i would have never started writing Sticking out tongue but hey dont give up..if you come to a piont where you feel to write juts go for it Smiling and yeah i will help mate Eye-wink
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> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
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yeah must be
but eum idk im not too much about writting poem lol
maybe when I,ll have some difficulties again i guess ill write moore:P
yeah maybe
well most of the time its better to write it straight away in english cause yes you dont have to translate words...
but well mine was already wrote in french before xd
next one Sticking out tongue
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and yeah of course i wud love you help me on it Smiling
if i ever got another idea for a poem i'll tell you 'bout Smiling
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btw areyou going on msn often or only fb?

--
--P!nk's funny hoe!! --
...♪I'm not Dead F****ers!!! ♪♫...
^^Amen, long live to P!NK!!! =D^^

--P!nk's funny hoe!! --
...♪I'm not Dead F***ers!!! ♪♫...
^^Amen, long live to P!NK!!! =D^^
3> love ya'll my 3 VIF <3

dw nini my first poem did not fit either its "thankyou very much" its here too...but than you get the system of writing them you know?even the words comes more easily..try to ryhme them too..its sounds better Eye-wink hey i can help if you like...maybe because you traslated it..maybe if you write it in english srtaight away it would fit more Sticking out tongue ..ofcource its good i told you it is Smiling

--
Jessica
'make up ur mind coz its now or never'

> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF Sticking out tongue Smiling

thank you mate nice to know you liked it Smiling
told you im not the best one for that xd
but yeah maybe ill improve lol:P
haha nice you liked to read the french part xd
I found it better then the other one Sticking out tongue

--
--P!nk's funny hoe!! --
...♪I'm not Dead F****ers!!! ♪♫...
^^Amen, long live to P!NK!!! =D^^

--P!nk's funny hoe!! --
...♪I'm not Dead F***ers!!! ♪♫...
^^Amen, long live to P!NK!!! =D^^
3> love ya'll my 3 VIF <3

hey nini what a strong massege you said there...my frend you are good..keep writing more..you are right when someone goes away he never comes back and so we have to cherish them while they are still with us...i like the methphor of the wave that is clever of you..but some words dont fit..dw you keep improving while you keep writing..but on the whole its good mate Eye-wink i like the message of it..and ohh i like reading the french part eventhough i understood anything Sticking out tongue
--
Jessica
'make up ur mind coz its now or never'

> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF Sticking out tongue Smiling