hey I'm 14 years old, and I wrote a song called 'please forgive me'
''please forgive me''
[verse 1]
It seems like it’s finished
But when I hear your voice
When I think of how we met
I get a feeling that I’ll never get back
And I know
If I’d see you again
It would be like yesterday
It would feel like we’re together
But I know that ain’t true
And you know that’s true
I still care
Ooh oh
[chorus]
I want you back
Please forgive me, please forgive me
Look into my eyes
There’s still love left for you
Nothing less than yesterday
I pray, will you hear my voice
And will it be okay
[verse 2]
It seems like it done
but I’m still not over you
I think I’ll never be
Am I too demanding
When I ask you to come back
Wanna kiss you hug you be with you
Don’t you have this feeling
Don’t you feel it too
Ooh, you have to know I write this song for you
I still care
[chorus]
I want you back
Please forgive me, please forgive me
Look into my eyes
There’s still love left for you
Nothing less than yesterday
I pray, will you hear my voice
And will it be okay
[chorus]
I want you back ( we are ment to be)
Please forgive me, please forgive me
Look into my eyes
There’s still love left for you
Nothing less than yesterday (I guess it’s even more)
I pray, will you hear my voice
And will it be okay
Ooh, Tell me will it be okay

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please tell me, is it a good song?
because I love to write songs, and want it as my profession later..
xoxo thanQ