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Sitting in the shower letting the steaming hot water splash onto my skin
I watch as the steam collects outside the shower
I watch as it obsorbs all my pain, feelings and problems
I watch as it fogs up the mirror; covering up the hideous being inside me
I cant breath; the hot water and steam make it hard
I dont move
I sit there like a statue
I can hear the water rushing out of the showerhead
But I pay no attetion to it
The hot water has made my body numb
So now I barely feel it
That is until it turns ice cold
It jolts me back to reality
Throws everything back at me
Oh how the water has betrayed me
The ice cold water seeps through me and chills my bones
Still I sit there in a daze
Then finally realize that I must get out
That I must face reality and its cold embrace
Oh how I wish I could make the water hot again
And watch the steam take everything away once again
Note: Im not sure if I posted this or not its been awhile since I've been on here because I couldnt remember my login info
please tell me what you think! 
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WOW!! i love that poem... It's really good and i reate to it so much. I lov the feeling of a temporary release from your pain butyou only wish it wasn't temporary
That poems a grea inspiration to me thanks 
xx
havent been on here in awhile, again.. but i read the title and i had to read it...ITS SOOOo good..im in love with it...i havent been able to write for a long ass time, but i enjoy reading others and im gla i read this one..looking forward to read more of yours..keep up the good work:D
-_-S.M.I.L.E-_-
i love writing poetry!! its my escape. i havent written much lately but I plan on starting again. Yes my other poem is called your beautiful lies. Im so glad you like my poems! That makes me happy lol. ill try to post more when I can.
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"The pain you feel is real you're not asleep but it's a nightmare
But you can wake up anytime"
"Everyday I fight a war against the mirror
I can't take the person starin' back at me
I'm a hazard to myself"
"The pain you feel is real you're not asleep but it's a nightmare
But you can wake up anytime"
"Everyday I fight a war against the mirror
I can't take the person starin' back at me
I'm a hazard to myself"
well do you want to know what i think??? you are a brilliant poet!!!
i even read beautiful lies!!!! i think its called like that..cuz i read it a long time ago...and it blew me away... its gd you are here...cuz it seems like im the only one who is posting poetry
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> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF
> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF
well do you wnat to know what i trhink??? you are a brilliant poet!!!
i even read beaitiful lies!!!! i think its called like that..cuz i read it a long time ago...and it blew me away... its gd you are here...cuz it seems like im the only one who is posting poetry
--
> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF
> Jessica
* ''make up ur mind coz its now or never''
-- P!nk's fist hoe
# Pinkianity and Pinkians forever
< one big, crazy, holy, nice, amazing Pinkian Family
^ love you all my 3 VIF